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Knodr
March 30th, 2005, 12:08am
Horror

A fire from the stars
A witch burning trangressions
Mother cries; dead children

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Lonliness

Wanting to be one
But not wanting to be you
So I die alone

K-9
March 30th, 2005, 10:19am
Rain falls from the bove
The sky weeps for Earth's sorrow
Let the flood come down

Actually, traditional Japanese haiku doesn't follow the 5-7-5 syllable pattern. Forget, think it's 7-9-7 but 5-7-5 has a different name.

Blade
April 2nd, 2005, 3:42pm
Pubic hair in the
Vaseline jar shows how lone-
ly you really are