My Heart Burns of Heartache

[Knodr]

Come little children and sit beside me(pay attention to what is to follow)
I am the voice from the pillow
I will tell you a story of such sorrow
My heart burns

We met on January far from home
She looked at me and smiled
She caused my heart to race so wild
Our week together was fun and filled with laughter
Parting was of such sadness
My heart burns

We met of February far from home
She looked at me and changed me
My grey eyes where filled with lust
That kiss almost made my heart bust
My heart burns

Come little children and sit beside me(pay attention to what is to follow)
I am the voice from the pillow
I will tell you a story of such sorrow
My heart burns

We met on July right at home
My family thought tat she was cute
They all thought her voice was like a flute
Our lust consumed us
My heart burns

We met on August right at home
Father was in a wonderful mood
He let us go four our normal walk
And forgot all about our little talk
I got in trouble for his absent mind
And for this my heart burns

Come little children and sit beside me(pay attention to what is to follow)
I am the voice from the pillow
I will tell you a story of such sorrow
My heart burns

We met on October far from home
The joy pf reunion flowed in my veins
Feeding my soul and curing all pains
Nothing could go wrong on that night
Our lust consumed us
My heart burns

We met on December right at home
Two months was too long and our lust consumed us
She treated my friends like strangers and my lust faded
My friends didn't trust her not for her being a stranger
But for her treating everyone as one and refusing to be close
My heart burns

Come little children and sit beside me(pay attention to what is to follow)
I am the voice from the pillow
I will tell you a story of such sorrow
My heart burns

I told her that I had to let her go
She didn't understand nor did she want to know
I told myself that a caged bird doesn't live very long
Especially if the bird isn't fed
My heart burns

Her cries are roaming around in my thoughts
Through my vain attempts they refuse to be lost
I feel her hatred as I show her my love
I slaughtered a dove and drowned in her blood
My heart burns

Come little children and sit beside me(I see tears for what has followed)
I am the voice from the pillow
Please do not hate me for what I have done
I am dieing from the hate of a loved one
My heart burns of heartache
So much sorrow burn within my soul

Do not fret little children, the pain is numbing
And soon I shall not feel anything
O, dear children! you cry because you do not yet understand
I cry because I have shattered a heart(darkened a soul)!
Mine and mine own
Hers was broken in half by my calm words
My shards cannot be found in my dark soul
For my heart burns of heartache

I let her go because I loved her.
I let her go because I cared for her!
I let her go because I could not feel her anymore.
I let her go because she burned my heart!

Come little children and pay attention(learn from my mistake)
I am the voice from the pillow
Never give all your love to the first that enchants your spirit
The one I love is slowly suffocating me
I am the voice from the pillow

I feel as though I will never know
What it would be like to show
My feelings for another woman as I had feelings for her
My heart burns

I know she will find someone right for her
That I am not worried about
I fear that which already is happening
A life for me(love without)

Just as the clouds have gone to sleep
I can be seen in my frozen keep
Screaming alone and in fear I question why,
"Damn, why doesn't this hurt allow me to die!?"

Allowing myself to be the thing that I once was
Slowly going from love to hate; hate to apathy
Through the darkness of love I was blind
I shall soon see through the light of apathy
From a safe distance I will see their reality(they have no morality)

Come back, little children, I see you fear me
What harm can I do to those whom have not harmed me?
I care nothing of your feelings.(Your secret, evil dealings.)
I am harmless to the innocent(yet who amongst us is so?)
And I am God's Hammer to the evil. (Fighting Evil with evil)
My heart burns of heartache

Damn, why doesn't this hurt allow me to die!?
My heart is shattered and yet I live
Blood flooding a dark crevice within my chest
I hope the next woman who comes along tries her best
To help me fell that void within the abyss

Heartache
My heart burns
Heartache

[Tedronai]

First off, I wonder why this is in Rakuen.

Secondly.. Why, knodr? From what you had always told me, I'd never have seen this coming from a few hundred miles away. Providing I'm interpreting this correctly...

Thirdly... Nice work on the poem itself. Depressing though it may be, it's good work.

[animeshounen]

Its great, quite good.

I enjoyed it at least...


But the title could be...a little better.

"My heart burns of Heartache" Is a little redundant.

"My Heart aches of Heartburn" is just retarded. But thats all I got. :)

[Knodr]

Couldn't find the right forum for it. I guess I didn't look hard enough.

Yea, I think I stole, some parts from Rammsatein. Is it copyright infrigment if you change 60% of the stolen product? 95%?

[animeshounen]

I suppose you can infringe up to...99.999999% before someone really notices.


Just look at Vanilla Ice's "Ice Ice Baby" And "Under Pressure" by Queen and David Bowie.



Just for ripping off that song, he should be shot and thrown into the sea.

[Nanaki]

one time i ate pizza and a grilled chicken burger in the same meal

[Blade]

Scandalous. =O

About fifteen minutes into the movie Constantine, expect yourselves to be totally awesomified and deja vu'd. It's a biography. About me.